All Comments on 'Pale and Pretty Vampire'

This is worthy of a second chapter

Well written and had me interested from start to finish. I, too, would like it if you wrote more chapters but understand you most likely won't. It is a satisfying short. Thanks for sharing.

I agree with the other 2 comments. While I do not usually like the Vampire stories on here, this one was good and I would like to read more chapters about these 2.

Awesome please more!

vampires do have that rep of being an erotic fantasy so wats not to like? it was giving me flashes of some anime combined with only lovers left alive ( the guitar reference). good luck, sopharoones

Thank you all for reading. I am working on the NEXT encounter :-[,,,

I want a pretty vampire to love me unconscious, and then stay...forever.