All Comments on 'Rings of Fire Ch. 14'

Really a riveting story line. As you mention several stories unfolding at the same time, please consider continuing under the Rings of Fire heading. Unfold them all together at the same time. 2 to 4 page increments. I feel your readers will keep pace with forward and backward moves in the time frame.

Good job.

I like where you are going with this, can't wait to read what comes next in the other books

I dont like cliffhanger. But to this one i am waiting. I hope not too long.

But i have a question who is Clay Dodd and Benedict Arnold?

I can hardly wait for all the stories!!! Fabulous job, I love your writing!!!

Please, if you can, continue the stories, preferably named in such a way that your readers can easily follow them? This has been a real page-turner for me so far.

Would really like to read the rest of this

Ok now that i have finished the story after reading the arrangement have to say i was highly entertained by both. Very well written great story line. Wish there would have been more to this 1 tho. Not to patiently waiting on the next stories. Thank for all ur hard work.

3 years later, nothing. Very disappointed.