by TxRad
why is it that when it's 2 males in a story that one is short and thick and the other is long and thin? Just make one bigger than the other
Using Bobby and Rob was not a good idea, way too similar names. You also need to do a better job of keeping them straight, it was very hard to follow who was doing what, for example, was Bobby getting a blowjob or fucking her? Good storyline though. 4/5
Wow! What wont your naughty mind thing up next?! Lovin it keep it coming You keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Be well and stay happy!
Cheers
SAGE
This get's boring. She has lost the novelty of her personality and is just a guy with a pussy. Also, not everyone celebrates the ass hole. Some of us know what comes out of them and want no part of it. Why not have it used just a little bit. Myself and most men love a beautiful pussy, can't get enough of it.