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ElectricBadgeralmost 14 years agoFun, but abrupt ending!
Neat story, but ended very suddenly...would have liked to see a bit more of their time adjusting and tension over whether they'd be released. As with all your stories, you have great ideas but seem to rush through them!
imurddyalmost 14 years agodittos
I agree with the other guy, too abrupt an ending, needs more detail in their training. Read some similar stories from other authors for stimulating ideas!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoVoted '5', and THANK YOU...
...for writing a petplay/ponyplay story -- this type is under-represented at Literotica. Please write more.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI would expect a story this naive in a women's magazine
As it is, it just a yawner.
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