by youbadboy
What a great idea - mistaking sex for alien abduction! Loved our misunderstood heroine and the concept - really clever.
Sooo funny, playing with the power of the human mind to rationalize whatever the body wants to do/needs to be done to it...!
Great idea. I loved her questionable mental state...brings to mind a whole bunch of ideas. I truly admire your style...very concise. Suits the premise well. Excellent piece of work.
A delightful, amusing little story. What imaginations you humans have. Of course, we don't actually abduct anyone, (well, not any more), we're just here to study you. You're species is really unique.
You captured the thought processes of some of the most complex and confusing creatures on earth - those teenage girls with "perfect" bodies. I have to give you kudos, it takes a great writer to think like that well enough to pull it off without actually being one; and no such creature could ever write herself into such a story so well, simply by virtue of the fact that she is herself, and cannot see herself as the rest of us "mortals" do. Brilliantly written, with many interesting blot twists.
You almost had me believing that 'the truth is out there, somewhere'! Sara got what she wanted as did her daddy (lucky fellow)and her 'X' Files simply turned out to be their '(SE)X' Files! Great work!
This little girl was soooooo crazy. Lucky for her she had a daddy that understood. I loved it.
..... just wondered if Little girls ever get pregnant from being abducted. Can imagine the thoughts going through the head of a little girl that believed she was made pregnant during an "abduction".
It's always interesting to read a story where the main character has the exact same name as I do...I may be a little more sane than she is, though...
-Sara
humerotic, coincidentally just watched XXX Alice (1976) found in a torrent search. Same kind of eroticism. humor
kilgore Rumfoord , Greetings, from Tralfamadore
What a great piece of writing - a new look at being one with our aliens. I couldn't stop laughing and they had to drag me off to decompress/ Really superb!
Enjoyed it but I have to say, you might want to tweak the part where a fresh young 18-year-old high-school graduate goes to Sam's Club and buys vodka and a 5-gallon pail of ice cream. Did you perhaps mean a 1-gallon pail of ice cream? And she'd need to get someone else to buy the booze.
We will measure all women and then, we will probe the asshole of the perfect ones..
We only wonder how this girl found out our secret!!!
What a combination, very erotic and made me laugh too. One of your very best!
Loved it! The combination of the Sci Fi, the abduction obsession and your imagination
almost made me feel like YOU believed it !!!
I enjoyed this story very much, funny and original.
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I love Sara, her perfect body, her fertile imagination, and her total openness.