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by StevenCin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good story

There are a few typos, but the story develops well and the details are unique. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very well done. Nice quick, sexy read. Maybe a second chapter?

mick52mick52about 5 years ago
LIked it a lot

Don't worry about the organism typo. Was probably autocorrect, or maybe that's the term for the best orgasm ever. Great story, continue please.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 5 years ago
Very well done!

Will there be more...hopefully?

amritaloveramritaloverabout 5 years ago
Great Start

More Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More

Don't stop now. That was a great story. I can smell more chapters.

RenMan987RenMan987almost 5 years ago
Wow!

Love this story.

Excellent job with the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Can't wait for more

It has a great story line, a building of the characters and a sexy and caring climax.

Can't wait for more of your brand of creativity.

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I am an amateur writer in the area of erotic literature. I like to write stories laced with good dialogue, interesting characters, believable situations, romance as well as sex. I like stories about innocent women transformed by lust.