All Comments on 'Sherri's Education'

Take your time with the details. And explain thoroughly

What each is thinking/feeling!

I just love stories like this. Make sure you always use the same "voice", as in don't switch between I and she so much. It's distracting to the reader, and this was one plot that I did not want to be distracted from! Nicely done.

omg......this was soooooo hot......i loved it......this can really happen....i know.....my brother had to force me the first few times, but then i really started enjoying it & i still enjoy it.....he still makes me call him daddy when we fuck.....dadeesgrl2000 at yahoo

Why don't you write anymore? The two stories you've submitted are so unapologetically sexy it would be great if you wrote another.

Therefore putting an end to my little dry spell. Hot!

one of the best stories i have read in a long time, look forward to more, very hot

very good story would love to read a ch. 2 to this

Me, Her, I, all self-described the daughter.

Stick with first person or 2nd person, don't flip-flop back and forth, distracts from the story.

continue the story

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this is so hott. Ive never fantasized about my father but the idea of incest gets me so wet.

If you were a daddy and got your daughter pregnant and she had a girl, would they be sexually attracted to it to?

Why because they know what buttons to press and how to gently get between their legs and load them up with active sperm . their should be much more activity between dads and daughters and of course mums and sons too

On the one hand; the sex itself is pretty damn hot

BUT

He's a loser - think about it. He's supposed to be a HUNK; big, strong, great looking. She admitted that she thinks he's hot; then instead of "manning up" and seducing her by honest means "romance her with dinner, music, dancing & a G-o-o-d movie" -- he has to wimp-out, get her drunk, introduce her to porn, and tie her down. Does he have a spine?

Honestly; he really isn't worth the dirt on the bottom of her shoes!

DKP

Too bad you stopped writing cause I'd like to see more from you.

Don't forget this is all fantasy.... All it's supposed to do is entertain you... It's not real and almost certainly would never happen like this....... (well, maybe in a few places it would for real).... but here it's happening only in our minds... and I'd admit that I've had fantasies similar to this though since I never had a daughter, they were JUST fantasies...

It would be fun to reenact them as if they were real.....

How could a daughter still love her father after he basically raped her??? Maybe it's someone's cup of tea, but certinally not mine...

Very similar circumstances happened to my dad and me. Dad divorced mom after he found pictures of her sucking a guys cock and he got custody of me. I always wore just T-shirt (no bra, although I was 34B) and panties in the house. One time I wore a thong and cropped shirt just to see what he'd say...not really intending to have sex. He really liked it and said I didn't have to change panties if that's what I wore that day. One night I had on a very skimpy Victoria's Secret lace thong that when I lied down on the sofa revealed my hairless pussy. The rest you can imagine!

PM me. I want to hear more about you and your daddy!

He ruined her favourite nightie! I feel a shopping trip coming on lol.

Loved the theme but I have to echo what others of said about using either first or second person to write, don't keep swapping, its confusing.

Daddy apparently doesn't know where the hymen is and should learn before telling more stories!

I've read both of your stories and liked them very much. Do you plan to write more? How about a part 2 to each of them?

Like the above comment, I too have read both of your stories and wish for more. Makes me wonder if I might have had this loving experience with my daddy if my parents weren't divorced. ??? Hhmmm - nice to think about!

This is the first story I have read where the narrator was in the :First - Second - and Third Persons all at the same time. No I am not an English Major.

This was almost too funny...

"pumping his cum deep inside his little girl for about three minutes solid."

Exaggeration is almost mandatory in stories on Lit, but let's keep it on the planet Earth, OK?

Wow. I’m hard. Thank you.

Sex education involves sweet young daughter learning how to suck daddy's cock, then their are rimming games and anal skills to learn before even thinking about babies. So much fun first.