by lovecraft68
So hot! It would be even better with a little cleanup of some language inconsistencies. These are really fun -- a good story line with good writing to go with the hot subject.
This was sweet and sensual. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keeps feeling like your working it up to something that is going to shock, and hopefully amaze. Sincerely, PB.
The story line is intriguing and provides a lot of detail about the two lovers. Not as hot aas some of yours but still pretty good. The remembrances are interesting, but I don’t find them as hot as stories in the present. Guess we will get there sooner or later.