All Comments on 'Siblings with Benefits Ch. 08'

You never cease to amaze me with how this story goes.... Erotic, beautiful and simply amazing..... so cannot wait for the next installment!

it was a wonderful chapter, and well worth the wait.

The last two paragraphs twisted my guts at how Megan was playing Mark. A single tear, indeed.

And that is what we call the First Plot Point. The Inciting Incident. Well done.

So what are they gonna do now?

No redeeming qualities whatsoever.

Sweet

But seriously, you need a copy editor, or at least need to use grammar check. I have to downgrade a possible 5 into a 3

laid vs lay, were vs we're and on and on

And for those of you who complain about Grammar Nazis, it really does ruin the flow of the story when you have to stop and say "oh he meant THAT."

Loving the story (brilliant describing the connection between the siblings and their dark pasts), but the sister, Megan, just pissed me off at the end of this chapter!

Yeah, the grammar mistakes are annoying. But I just keep reading and ignore them. The author worked hard and for free to put out an enjoyably heartfelt sexy story, so I'm not going to worry about a few mistakes.

I'll never get any housework done today!

Dammit Megan!

I always hated that saying... Love, a disease that affects the body and mind. Over love wars have been fought. Men, women, and children have been killed. So much tragedy, heartache and wounds have been caused in the name of love. Yet... we are so much more with it. Love can mend those damages that have been done to us. Maybe not completely fix it, but give it a damn good start. Seeing Mark and Megan in the positions they are in, it is very dangerous for them both. On one hand we have a man who fights to show his superiority, and wishes to dominate all who test him. He does this to protect the fact that he is compassionate and sensitive at heart. The only person who he has truly opened himself to, become vulnerable to is a woman who has twisted much of their familial bond into something strange, alien, and dark. Megan herself carries scars, both physicaly and emotionally, and I wonder if this character actually knows the game she is playing. The worst things in life we can do are telling lies to ourselves...the lie she is telling herself is that she is in control. It is very obvious right now that she does not hold the reins in this relationship. I take that back, she does hold the reins, but only because Mark has not taken them from her. She is allowed the power, but that is not true power...not at all. Sincerely, PB

I've Been reading the Series slowly for several days now an this episode I will definitely read again an again Best Erotic I Have Read on this Site So Far! You are a Very Talented Artistic Writer an Should Look in to getting some of Your Work Published!

Two love stories combined into one with female and male lovers made this a very readable romantic tale. I don’t know where it is going, but it exposes the reality of life and love. It would be an easier read if the mistakes were eliminated by careful proofreading.