by lovecraft68
You are confusing. You said in chapter 19 certain things were going to happen, but chapter 20 didn’t follow through, nor does it appear chapter 21 either. Looks like you had second thoughts but neglected to mention the changes. Your note refers to a character that hasn’t appeared yet.
I think I am caught up with the story line. You really messed up the trend by slipping in the fuckfest in Chicago that had nothing to do with the story. I hope Megan gets her act together. I don’t care for her attitude and hope her situation improves soon.