All Comments on 'Sight Unseen'

Too short but dang sweet!

Good story, way too short. I sometimes think when people want the reader on the edge of their seat for the next chapter, they cut it too short. This is one of those times.

I really enjoyed it but I wish that it could have continued on to a more satisfactory conclusion.

Fascinating, hoping that a sequel or more to this story

Funny that it wasn’t her date, but overall I was frustrated. I like slow burn stories so my mind was thinking…what happened to the marriage? Why was she looking for a woman? And a first kiss with a woman is generally a big step for a formerly straight woman so they could’ve spent time getting to know each other. And who are these people? I barely know one, don’t know the other at all (except she sounds cute ). And so on, not to mention…now what…. It seems pretty common that new writers write short stories, and frankly I don’t often suggest they go further. But I think you may have the chops so go for it! Nice start :)

Thanks for the feedback! I brought across 5 mini-short stories that I had posted on my website to give a flavor for my writing style. I have some fully developed short stories published on Amazon (1 complete series, 3 titles under my new series, and another series on the way). Now that I'm up to speed on the website, I'll be posting some longer works. Hope you check back in...

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Harper Anne

I like it, but this is not a story. Its not even really a chapter… its the start of what could be a chapter or a story.