All Comments on 'Sis, Is That You?'

Just finished your story and really enjoyed it.

You built the story line fantastically.

I look forward to reading other stories you have written. I hope that they include what I refer to as the love factor.

I enjoy stories that show the love between family members in the following order.

Siblings, cousins, father daughter then whole family but must have love.

Ron

This story had me coming it was so hot. I would love to see what follows.

keep the stories coming! always liked that your stories involve younger guys and older ladies, never a fan of little sis big bro i wanna protect you crap. cheers!

I hope you continue this story. As someone who was in an incestuous relationship, the story is believable, unlike so many on here.

Hope this story continues. I really enjoyed it.

The story was funny, sexy, clever and had a degree of sweetness to it as well and being a big fan of brother/sister stories it hit all my sweet spots.

Five stars.

great story and as a rhode islander, loved the local touch

this is erotic and well written, sure a few spelling errors and that kind of crap, but I loved this and wish it could happen to me. very sexy. oh ya, five stars too.

I have read a number of your stories. This is definitely one of the best. A lot of writers stories are pure fantasy but I see this as something that could have actually happened. Great job.

5/5, love to read some more of these two. The cam show could be fun teasing all the viewers and they might even fall in love and end up as a couple. keep going

Love the idea would be a good pace to run with different topics, from different chat rooms!

Other than a few minor typos, it was a great story. Plz continue

Lovecraft,

Enjoy all of your stories. I have you as a favorite author. The build up was very good. I only would ask that you get a better proofreader. Occasional mistakes make for a loss of continuity because you need to go back and make sure you have the correct context. That being said hot hot hot! 5 of 5

Daytymer

You never disappoint. Best simmer to boil ratio on the site.

This was a very good story and fairly believable.

I NEVER comment but loved this story

you are my all time favorite author on this site and for good reason theres not many of your storys that i dont like

Sequel please

Not bad. You do need help with some spelling and such, though. But, just wanted to say thanks for making him a Panther and not a Hawk.

good story but needs a little work and a second and third chapter. do the parents find out how do they find time to get together these and other questions need answers so write another chapter soon please.

One of the best ive ever read, loved it.

Thanks 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

What a fantastic fuck story. My cock was hard for the last 4 pages. I had to "take a break" and relieve the pressure. Please add another chapter

I get very distracted by his / her mistakes or a wrong phrase. But its a good story and with help you'll get better!

My new favourite story. so hot and sexy, thanks again big time!

5/5

I googled the link and WOW . you have told the tale brilliantly. The look on their faces is knock out, the way you enhanced the story - brilliant. Keep up the good work.

a little confused at the beginning "she males for you?"

strong finish

... quite some time ago.

And I'd forgotten exactly how hot it was!

Loved it, of course.

Naturally it deserves 5 Stars.

I agree with the Anonymous who said that, unlike so many stories on this site, this one is believable. And, just as she must have so many times before, big sis dominates her - no longer so little - brother. He loves it, of course, just as much as she does.

This is an awesome story that is very much possible and was told with drama and passion and the sex descriptive was great. my kind of story!

I enjoyed this story please write more to it

I enjoyed it.

Very good

You ended on them contemplating a couples video. I think that's the perfect opportunity to expand their little incestual fuckfest with the parents. Just a thought!

A new LC68 story? Fuck, dude!! I thought you just up and quit writing! You just made my year! Loved the story. The only thing better would have the mom get in on the action. Hopefully your next submission won't take as long to publish as this one.

You have a great knack for down and dirty coupled with sweet and sexy - a great mix which works oh so well in this story.

You really need to continue this story. Your characters came across very real which was a nice touch.

Phenomenal story LC!

Really needs a SECOND chapter! Or THREE

LOL

Normally I'm not into sibling stuff, but I read this for the April Fools contest. Really damn good!

Can't wait for chapter 2 of this!!!!

The only downside was the lack of dialogue from him when they started to screw at the end. Adding him getting into it with her would have been very hot.

Other than a few needed fixes I love this story! I usually like your work but the huge problem that I usually have is your male characters are always wimpy and I just can't favor those stories, however I love this and hope that there's more.

So bad he did not cum inside her.

This was a fun sexy read. It has gotten my blood flowing for when I get home from work and see my wife. I can't wait to read part 2 and I will be looking up the video you mentioned.

This story was great. Very hot. Probably the most I've cum reading one of these

First of all, thank you for taking the time to write and submit this. After reading it I clicked your name and wow, you are one prolific author! 5 stars from me for this one!

As with others, the typos threw me off a little, but easy enough to overlook, so don't sweat about getting a proofreader or editor if it's an issue.

Regarding adding more chapters, I have to disagree with most of the comments here. For me (and I'm sure for many others), it's the journey from being a "normal family" to an incestuous one that provides the most emotional payoff. Simply describing repeated sex scenes between family members can get old pretty quickly. This is why most stories leave off after that and say "they lived happily ever after", lol.

I would instead encourage you to continue to look for inspiration for new ways that family members could get together. I checked the video that inspired this story, and you were right on the money! You could just as easily have said, "Someone made a short video about my story" and it would have been totally believable.

This is the best piece of writing I've read among the contest submissions. Lots of showing not just telling. Dialogue is done well.

Leaving the typos though, just shows disrespect for your reader. You send the message that you just don't care about your reader. Really, it's not trivial.

You've told this story. Its an extension of the commercial. There is nowhere else to go with it.

you could turn this into a series if you wanted it would be a really nice series with a nice storyline already prepared

welcum back LC !

that was pretty steamy !

LC, you are the best!!!

LC just love reading your stories. U never disappoint n i do not mind reading it even if its 50 pages long. But still Return of Molly Minx my all time fav.

Absolutely fantastic story! I knew exactly what comnercial you were referencing and got a good chuckle thinking about it. Cheers, lovecrsft68!

This story was AMAZING! The dialogue/banter between the siblings is genuine and realistic, too. It greatly adds to the eroticism of the prose. Well done!

One of the best stories I've read on this site so far!

The dialogue avoided cheesy stereotypes, and was well put together.

The action was detailed and crazy hot.

Only shame is that it can't be rated higher than 5/5.

Great work, looking forward to more releases!

Great story! I love the accidental hookup angle. One of my biggest fantasies is stumbling into someone I know on a porn site, especially if it was my hot older sister.

Will there be a follow up chapter? Stories been left with a 'cliff hanger' ending with them about to log on to the couples website.

Want more....

This is quite possibly the single hottest thing I've read since coming to this website. If only...

Well done, not cheesy or repetitive with the sex, bring on the next chapter.............wish I had a sister

Definitely the best brother/sister incest tale I've read anywhere! Hope you decide to continue this with additional chapters with these two siblings.

Great story, very well written and extremely erotic too!

you actually have to stop reading to jerk off. Some grammar errors, but very nice story. 5 stars for you, my friend.

It is too hot to stop now.

Both of them 'performing' together on-line is an amazing thought !

Rapier

one of the best, dont stop, this can go much further

Glad to see you back on Lit. You're one of the best writers on this site. The characters are so realistic. Do you have any published works? Banjoman88

I have quite a few published works that are not on here. Contact me through the contact author form on my homepage and I will send you links and a list.

Damn!!!! You are so good at this!!! I am really happy you are back. I know you have to make a living and all but you are such a good writer and story teller it is a real treat when something new pops up. If it helps I have bought a few of your books not on Lit. (ya, ya, gotta buy more...). Thank You! And PLEASE surprise us once again with another FANTASTIC story.

Well written. Ashley mispelled a few times. Odd errors, like the wrong selection on a spellcheck. Amazon cock! LOL! 5*

Very erotic and the story flowed well.....when's the next chapter cumming?

Absolutely gripping! Had to read all 5 pages, couldn't put it down. You need to continue with the couples setting and expand on their relationship, PLEASE...

Again well done.

Loved the theme, and the video clip you recommended! Great story telling as usual.

Sorry to hear you are leaving literotica, but understand! Thank you!

I read a story where the sister and brother played on cam but charged for it. I thought that this was that story. I actually was disappointed that this was not that story. This is a great story by a great author though.

The story was exciting but three things should have been clarified well actually two really.

1.When Ashley said she would stop calling Sam names,but later she called him a dweeb,was that meant as an insult or a term of endearment.I think it was the latter.

2.It stated Ashley was in college,did they end up going to the same college and being a regular boyfriend/girlfriend.

3.Lastly Sam said he would like to take Ashley out on dates,did Ash ever accept.I hope she did because Sam seemed to love his sister,and same for her.

I hope they ended up together and lived long happy lives with each other and had lots of children to teach them incestuous love is the best and purest love you can have because family is the most important your ever gonna have.Always Sam and Ashley.

Been a reader on here for a while and this is by far the hottest story I've ever read.

More chapters, please!!!!

I haven’t been able to finish this in three tries. The way this girl talks is so sexy I can’t make it through without exploding. Well done writer.

Excellent thank you

I love this story even the first time I read something like it many years ago yours has a much better build up, then the other one I read on another website.

I'll have to find it an compare the two see who's really has the better story.

Totally freaking awesome 5/5

WOW! Very intense! Loved it!

Makes you think; With all of these types of sites, probably in the thousands, how many brothers find there sister on one? That would be an awaking.

Very well done. Just right—not too short & not too long.

5 stars!

Bill

Great story! Thanks for sharing.

I've read two stories from you now I enjoyed this one more than the other . Really enjoyed this

One of the hottest stories here.

Definitely a 5.

Bill S..

Absolutely one of your best stories, sir! I loved the set up, the way they've both ended up on the site, the dilemma they've found themselves in after first meeting online, then diving into things afterwards. The sweetness of the pair, under the hormones and hedonism of going into and being at college, *helps* the suspension of disbelief. "A story is simply a series of connected coincidences" is something I was told as a young writer and the more believable a writer can make those coincidences, the better the story will be. Thank you, LC68 - mission accomplished!

Anudder Winnah!

11/10 Hello Kitty Tees!!!!!

That was a very fun, sexy story!

Seriously, my all-time favourite story. Incest, tenderness, and unabashed sex with some you love.

The tons of typos aside... It was a really hot story!

Really enjoyed it!

Wonderful story!!!

Got and kept me super hard all the way through

You write really well.

Amazing story, loved it !!!!!!!!!!! Wish I would have had a sister like that.

Great story needs another chapter

Great story, though it seemed rushed at the end and there were a few wrong words here and there that made me have to stop and figure out what you meant to say. Enough to make me wonder if whoever it is that's suppose to be proofreading is actually reading it, and not just running a spell checker and grammar check against it. Still, for the overall, 4/5.

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Another well written and "HOT!!!!" story. Keep them coming. I enjoy reading your stories.

Wonderful story! Love brother/sister encounters. Sorry I had no sister. Oh well. Likely would have gotten her pregnant anyway.

Lovely story, but does require some significant proofreading, as there were some gender faux-pas and simply incorrect words.

Please continue?

A totally hot story! There needs be a ten star rating. Great tale.

Bill S.

F*ing fabulous. Too bad I'm in Spain and my sister is in UK

Great story. Just as hot as it was the first time I read it 6 years ago ;)