All Comments on 'Slave Girl Ch. 01-11'

This was a fun story, hope to see more of it. The characters have fun interplay. Great work.

This is getting good. More please!

What a lovely start to a story! I hope to read more of Quin and Rosa

Cannot wait for the next installment! Love the slow build!

Too slow for me.

I like gentle, or loving, femdom, but I wouldn’t have thought I would be interested in anything involving futa. I was, however, intrigued enough by the tease line, especially last four words: “A young Roman owner and a futa demon slave girl, but who is master?” that I decided to give this story a try anyway. I can’t adequately express just how glad I am that I did. Almost from the first line I was totally sucked into this world and these two people the author has created. I can feel the terror of this girl, Rosa, who must be purchased at this auction or, apparently, she will be killed. I can feel the conflict within Quinn as he deals with the idea that while this is not his problem and he doesn’t even want to own Rosa, or, apparently, any other slave, he just can’t let her die. The fun, as we get to watch these two grow, evolve and get to know each other, and, in Quinn's case anyway, get to know himself, as they begin their journey to Quinn’s farmland. It’s fun because the author makes it so real, so believable. Ultimately the tease line that so effectively lured me in isn’t totally accurate. Oh I guess, technically, Quinn owns Rosa but he’s not really her master except in name. It sure looks like Rosa is, ever so gently, working toward ownership of Quinn though. Five very enthusiastic stars and I can’t wait to see where this goes next! One thing puzzles me, and it’s not about the story itself? Why does this story only have five comments? Five stinkin comments. Come on people, this is a great story written by somebody who really knows how to do it. He needs to be told that!

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Writing before reading: this will now be the fourth series of yours I'm reading, I just know I'll love it based on the premise and comments, the slave thing made me trepidatious at first but a helpful comment has assuaged that and I'm looking forward to this, especially as it seems to be your longest series so far

wow, first time reading ur work, brilliant

Good writing and story, just very not for me. Dom/sub switch stuff works for me, but stereotypical femdom not so much. The futa element could be very interesting and I hope it is, but mc desiring being super sub not my thing. But glad there is good writing for those that it is their thing

Excellent start! An intriguing premise and setting in addition to the futa aspect which hasn't even been explored yet. Very well written so far with compelling characters, looking forward to more.