All Comments on 'Straight Bride Seduced'

A well told tale of naughty lust👄 I wonder how many brides are eaten out by their GFs on wedding day?

A really good read... and you've left it open for a possible sequel.

How sexy and dominant if Lara's brother was left at the altar and Lara and Jennifer became as one!

Please oh please keep going!!!!!!! Mmmmmmmmm I definitely love your stories Everytime 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 thank you.

Great story. I wanted it to be 10 pages long so I hope you add more chapters soon.

Extremely sexy and hot.

Loved it.

Ann

Can’t wait until you bring bride’s mom to party and maybe feminize husband/brother

Another great story. Can't wait for Ch.2 to see if both mothers get in on the action. Keep up the great work. We all love it.

Love this one can't wait for part 2

Excellent work up. Can we get more stages and even the mother seduced too. Then maybe the husband can get tricked (blindfolded) into a threesome....

A fun story! I wish it was longer and they developed something together! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Such a great job of showing the method of seduction and how it just became natural for Jennifer to turn.

Well done, as always!

Would like to watch my bride with another woman! A dream come (Or is it "cum"?) true. Gave your story 5 stars, Jasmine, because your story gave me a woody! I'd like to see a continuation (a cunt-inuation?)!

Can always count on you for a wonderful lesbian themed story. You and Ann Douglas are my fav authors.

You are simply amazing! Can we have stages 2 and 3 please????

Whenever I read your stories I can always be assured of quality. They are always well written and obviously checked for spelling and for errors in grammar. Thank you for producing another good story.

Loved it! And Lara's plan to have risk taking sex with Jennifer after she's married .... can't wait to read about it

Excellent as always but the mother needs seduced as well and don't forget the high school friend.

Yes we loved it and can't wait for lara doing stage 2 and 3 on jennifer in front of her brother then seducing jennifers sexy mom.

Deliciously naughty.

Your stories are always so erotic and sexy!

I hope you’ll be writing a part 2 for the evening part of the wedding!!

This isn’t the kind of story you just toss out and move on from. Please tell me we’ll be getting sequels in the form of Stages 2 & 3?

Hopefully we can see a couple of sequels with Jennifer's mother getting turned out by Lara, Jennifer turning her best friend Kendra, and her finance Mark getting completely feminized.

Always pushing the right buttons. Here-here to this continuing story line.

Very hot! I can’t wait for the sequels. I also want to hear about Lara using the strap-on with Jen after the wedding ceremony before she leaves for the honeymoon. Lara and Jen also have to get together after the honeymoon. Everything about this story says they will make a habit of pleasing each other when possible. I would like to see what happens if Jen’s Mother walks in on them. And what about a threesome with Hubby, Jen and Lara. I could go on and on. Please don’t make us wait.

This deff needs a few sequels....

Love if lara cucked her bro and consummated the wedding night without his participation denying him the pleasure of his wife

This was so good, my pussy is still tingling. Sequels please!

Once again you show off your mastery of erotic writing. We definitely need more of Lara and Jennifer.

I hope you do a follow up to this

You should have used American Express instead of MasterCard and Lay's instead of Pringles. Otherwise, typically great.

More more more of this story

To turn Jennifer into a total lesbian and steal her away from her brother,or just to turn her into a bisexual and secretly share her with her brother.I honestly don't think Lara was that cold-blooded to betray her brother and take his Bride.

I think she wanted to give Jennifer variety of not only having a man she loves,but also to have fun by having lesbian sex with Lara occasionally.Ironically I think its beautiful that Lara,Jennifer,and Brother can share the same woman,even tho Brother doesn't know it.

Lara albeit seemed like a selfish lesbian bitch at first she redeemed herself by making Jennifer see she was lucky to be marrying the man she loves,but can still play with Lara on the side to satisfy all 3 of them.Lovely Story.

What are the next two phases

When will it happen

Eager minds want to know

This was so damn sexy

Lara will set rules for Jennifer to follow AFTER she returns from the honeymoon. One rule would be for her to always answer her phone once Lara calls. Another would be visiting Lara while hubby goes golfing when she will learn from her Mistress the finer ways at pleasing a woman. Pleasurizing her husband would be letting him have access to her virgin asshole as the more stretching he does on her asshole, the easier will it be for Jennifer to do it with another man on Lara's orders. Keeping her pussy shaven thoroughly will put Jennifer on the spot when her Mistress demands instant dropping of her skirt and panties. Being available on weekends to go with Lara to meet and greet her girlfriends as well as sating them upon command. Being respectful to women of minority status to who are Lara's good friends and being submissive and more pleasing to them order when accused of being a racist for no reason at all. Agreeing to fuck men upon her Mistress's demand, even black men who have black girlfriends who are Lara's fgood friends. Assuming the risk for all unattended/unplanned pregnancies that happen outside the marriage, even interracial pregnancies without resorting to abortions and assuming risk for divorce. Encouraging and facilitating her mother to become friends with Lara and helping Lara snare her mother into becoming an apologetic submissive to Lara after being accused of being racist to lesbian women. Receiving feedback on her mother's progress in disciplinary punishments aimed at reforming her bad attitudes toward lesbianism, including participating as her domne under Lara's supervision. Disciplining her Mom in order to reinforce/reward her efforts to properly pleasurizing women and disabusing her of thinking how perfect she was as a person unless she pleases you and makes you happy as a low submissive.

I feel like Mark needed to be a character, rather than a concept.

Am I supposed to hate Lara, thus heightening the thrill of the taboo because of the dastardly lesbian sister seducing her brother's woman? I find it impossible to empathise with Mark because we know jack shit about him.

If I wasn't meant to hate her, you should have straight up made Mark an asshole that Jennifer ultimately needed to be saved from.

I t was a great read with building seduction. Will there be more?

I would like to make a suggestion about what might happen when Jennifer is walking down the aisle.

I think that it would be appropriate if her pussy was leaking pussy juice soaking her legs and dripping cum all the way to her ankles, so when she's standing there facing her future husband he would be able to smell her pussy

And when he kisses her after saying I dos he puts his mouth near her ear and whispers I can smell your sweet little cunt.

I loved the story, hope you follow up with what you alluded to with step 2 and or 3.

I really think it would be awesome if you did make a squeal with the strap on and double ended dildo, I would like some anal play thrown in there please, and the threesome incest sounds hot since Jennifer can't control herself.

The author kept us in suspence for most of the story until the climax. !! at the end!!!! AAAA+

Very good story. Hope you might give us a sequel.

erotic reading as always

Sizzling hot, very erotic!!

This story is hot!!! Please write stages 2 and 3. I know its been years but this masterpiece deserves a continuation.

Lesbian life sure is an awesome reality to whom that chooses rightly. Why some women chooses men over women I will never understand it except for the reason for the way they were reared. Life is too short to miss out on a blessing and gift that was put their by God yet the naiveté of both genders not arriving to that conclusion blows my mind. I love this story which I find it helpful to both genders unawares because the female would easily be able to pleasure her husband after being thoroughly and expertly seduced by her lesbian lover.

That Lara sure is evil. I guess she was reared to be a debaucher. Furthermore, Jennifer is a weak minded individual - she shows that lust trumps love. Pretty sure both genders agree that cheating sucks - unless people enjoy being simps in their relationships.

Another great story!

Over all good story.

In regards to the characters - cheating is cheating.

This not an attack on the author or moral high standing - merely a comment regarding the characters disregard for loyalty.

@kaleonani somtimes i have this nightmare visions of a future where earth is divided by sex on each half and men invent sexbot realistic enough to procreate(and even show fake feelings) and their conterpart use clones. a dystopiam reality. I personnaly feel that men could as emotionnaly sensibles as women but the end game according to lit is cuckholding and/or pegging/turned/femdom...

Cause let's face it there no human as potentiolly emotionnaly destrutive and devious as a woman can be(to a man).

To below,

What in the matrix hee haw are you talking about?

Yeah this one was just as bad. I got all hot and bothered with no place to go for pleasure but here with the words almost some action, but not happening. Pictures would be cool but that's a different site to see. One not here on Chromebook, maybe I will buy another laptop that I can see other type of sex movies more young and crazy than this tamed stuff. If there is a site I can see more explicit sexual acts with younger participants. I loved the story lesbian sex is cool and one day OI hope to eat pussy and see how it tastes good or bad, I've heard guys say its fishy but they eat it, is it really fishy or sweet as the girls always say. If you're a lesbian you eat pussy a lot I hope so girls should know if its good, why would they eat it always, I watch a lot of lesbian videos and the girls eat a lot of pussy. Oh well, enough about that. I thank you for the story.

I was going to comment on the story - but the comment below is peculiar.

Is there something between the lines?

My imagination?

Opinion: Focus on story plot and characters.

As for the story wish there was a part 2.

part 2 please. This is hot as hell

I am sure you get plenty of request and its impossible to fulfill all - but please finish the story.

Despite the Lara's devious plan to seduce Jennifer and cuckold her own brother - the story is hot.

I loved the fact that the erotic story open ended with a twist of threesome in Lara's bucket list. :)

Please no threesomes.

sequel!!!

Yes threesome's. More please. Was fantastic

No to threesomes.

great story sequel please.

A sequel where they use that strap-on would be amazing

No threesomes

All your stories are great. And I love stories of seduction and domination. Thank yoou.

491. Loved it. Really enjoy two women sexually enjoying each other without any issues. Would love to see stages two and three and maybe adding an additional family member.

This so deserves a sequel. Would love to know how far Lara pushes Jennifer.

You left it open for another chapter it you wanted to do 1 again only downfall to this story is you used the word slut in yet another story quit killing the story by using the word slut all your doing is killing the mood your going to lose your readers if you keep it up

Please write Chapter 2. No threesomes please. The main characters have more to explore on their own.

Thank you so much for this mind blowing story. totally arousing but very well written.

chapter two please!

The betrayal by family, both born and chosen (his fiance? really?) takes this from a decently hot seduction to a story filled with shit people and no real reason for it.

You should have wrote another part with her seducing Jennifer mother and then the threesome between the 3

great story, add another chapter at wedding him kissing wife telling her how sweet her lips taste, he gets too drunk, passes out, new sister in law consummates her wedding night, he goes on a 10 day business trip, Jennifer gets taken to pleasure she's never ever experienced before

I used to fuck my sister-in-law and almost fucked my mother-in-law and yes wife knew about it.

Very hot story. Jennifer is now truly Lara's sister slut. Would love to read about after the wedding with Jennifer being fucked by Lara with the strap on. You are without a doubt my favorite author on this site.

Lara doesn't deserve Jennifer.

Seducing her brother's fiancee..... What a low-life.

Lara will take over domesticating Jennifer by insisting her to go on an after honeymoon diet to lose the poundage accumulated on both sides of her hips. She will tell Jennifer she is dieting to keep her brother as her husband. She starts slimming pounds while being miserable in not having her pasta and Lara gives her a lot of positive reinforcement by feeding her small pieces of white pasta and leaving Jennifer feeling ashamed for breaking her diet and giving her a way to make amends to Mistress Lara by licking her wetting pussy. Jennifer buys clothing smaller than her size and shows them to Lara for her approval before wearing them to work sans bra and panties as the guilt spreads around her for not dieting enough.

Eventually Jennifer gets pregnant and Lara becomes the baby's godmother.