by mypenname3000
Passive characters are okay. They're okay. BUT, it is hella annoying when you make a passive character but they constantly complain "I should be the one dominating them!". Tell me if you're going to make him grow a pair cause I'm not going to enjoy this story if he's going to stay like this.
Also...he sees WWWAAAYYYYYY too many stars when he pops his nut...I think he has a brain tumor or something!! I love the story, but I see a lot of repetition in the editing style...it is kinda tiresome...
Mrs Spartan...a witch...uuummm...maybe, I still think it is the English prof...why else would she keep a vial of cum?? For a SPELL, of course...hopefully not something to steal Henry's powers...or his mother's!!
You get five stars for this...provisionally...future ones "may" be lower, depending on the quality...😱😨😠