by Sarahcheer
I would really love if you wrote a continuation of this series, maybe with a little bit more detail on the tormenting
First of all: Nice! Finally another Sarahcheer story. :)
Secondly: I'd also like to see where this could go. It's got potential.
I think that with the number of stories you wrote, that none of them have a little red square next to them, overall bad ratings and so few favorites, you should have gotten the idea that no one enjoyed your stories. Add me to that group.
This story is HOT. There is good attention to detail and a very good description of the bane suit and the girl's trepidation as she is being put into the suit and helmet.
I figured Sarah would loose the game, but she didn't need to come in dead last every single round. It would of been amusing to give her a hope spot in the first round. Say she drew 2, which made her think she was going to get out, before Megan pulls out the ace.