All Comments on 'The Blizzard'

Beautifully written. Very erotic but so tender. Again, great story :)

Well written, reminded me of my first time.

Wow! Two great stories in one day to get five stars.

A very well written story of a girls love and longings for her friend.

Her slow and lovingly teaching him about having sex for his first time.

Their love making was also slow and unhurried making it a wonderful experience for them both.

Thanks for the great read, looking forward to more of the story.

This is such a fine story, it's gotta be a winner!

Finally, some love to go with the lust.

Bravo!!!! Friendship,love,awakening, wow well done. Sweet and innocent. Love the first time stories. Keep it up and good luck I hope u win. =)

Load of crap dull build up then no detail Rubbiah

A story of romance at Xmas...something refreshing other than bondage and submission and freaks. Good on ya! Merry Christmas to all!

Romance, Christmas, blissfull and elegant sex, leaving something for the imagination. Well done!

The anonymous comment calling this rubbish was way out of line and certainly off the mark. This was a good read and certainly worth my time.

Sylvia and Andy surely got the ultimate Xmas present.

Wish I could have been so lucky.

5*

It would have been terrible if it had ended any other way......particularly at Christmas.

Although, I would have thought Andy wouldn't have cared a bit about helping to clean up.........!!!

Yes... It'll never work out

I really enjoyed this, how you built the characters and slowly brought them together. Great job!

Good but spoiled by the condom This is story land no VD or Babies

Nicely done. I liked how the female was the one leading and instructing him. And the end surely made me smile