All Comments on 'The Devil's Pact Pt. 28'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is turning out to be a sprawling epic. I am thoroughly enjoying not only the sexy bits, but the story progression... wanting to know what happens next. Keep up the great work. The only criticism for this chapter is the abrupt change in personality of Theodora/Tiffany. You would figure that the transition from strong holy warrior to incestious mom would take a bit more time or require a little work from the other characters. Like how the other family members had to be seduced. Otherwise, loving it!

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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