by Sexybeast8899
OK premise.
Sex much too fast. Too automatic. Too mechanical. No tension.
No foreplay.
No dialog about the kind of sex each really likes/doesn't like.
Three stars.
I liked it! Now write of story of the spouses that stayed behind in the hotel having a threesome while the other three were at the beach.
Maybe another story when the three come back from the beach and catching the three in bed together and it turns into an orgy. Everyone swapping spouses.
I liked it for the most part but he can’t have an erection on the beach but fucking is alright. I agree with Zephyer that I expected the spouses to be faking sick to cheat together
It was going great until you put the cop into the story. I would have liked a different way for you to get them to fuck