All Comments on 'The Hitchhiker'

We don't have enough explanation of what the cattle prod does to his dick. It's like we are supposed to already know, but many of us are not ranchers nor doms and don't have a clue. We don't understand the pain, what the touch does, how it makes him feel. Give us more please.

I am assuming there is going to be a follow up to this story, a part 2 as at the moment there is no ending to it

ShadowRosie, I take your point. However, I just like the idea to leave it to the imagination of the reader how the cattle prod will affect him. I think I gave some clues of how he will be reacting...

Hotwilly, I doubt there will be a follow up. The story has ended although the session goes on. The fate of Joshua and the extent of Caroles appetite is up to the imagination of the reader.