All Comments on 'The Playroom'

by brainfade

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LVGirlLVGirlover 8 years ago
Delighful

Thank you! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
And?

Now what? What's the rest of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That is why we have an imagination

There could be more, but it isn't necessary...I KNOW what happened next, and it is ... pretty erotic just to 'think' a little. Thanks

kjohns2001kjohns2001over 8 years ago
Wow.....damn near perfect!

Romance, mystery, and just a hint of magic or the paranormal. All the ingredients for a damn fine story and put together in one neat little package. I certainly hope that there will be more written to this story. These characters are too well written not to deserve their chance to live in the words on a screen or a page.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 8 years ago
The Playroom.

That was a cracking good tale.First time I have read your work. I am now going through the rest of your stuff.Thanks very much.

jlg07jlg07about 1 month ago

Great story! I'd love to hear more of them!

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