by legerdemer
The natural, unobtrusive use of dialect, plus the unusually perceptive and convincing seduction scenes, drew me right in to the little reality you created.
Indeed you are a good writer. The lack of spelling errors, wry humor, gentle sex.....all make for a wonderful story.
What an interesting little tale! The writing is very good, the dialect natural and unobtrusive, the whole story had a nice flow to it. I felt a little lost in the time period ... sometimes it felt practically medieval, other times more modern words and clues crept in, and I found myself a little distracted trying to figure it out. Overall, a romantic, erotic and sweet story.