All Comments on 'The Purveyor of Love'

by legerdemer

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RichardBentwoodRichardBentwoodabout 8 years ago
Not really spank bank material

But youre a damn good writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not what I was expecting.

Very well written, thanks!

AlwaysHungryAlwaysHungryabout 8 years ago
Welcome to your world

The natural, unobtrusive use of dialect, plus the unusually perceptive and convincing seduction scenes, drew me right in to the little reality you created.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Enjoyable

Indeed you are a good writer. The lack of spelling errors, wry humor, gentle sex.....all make for a wonderful story.

sheabluesheablueabout 8 years ago
Interesting!

What an interesting little tale! The writing is very good, the dialect natural and unobtrusive, the whole story had a nice flow to it. I felt a little lost in the time period ... sometimes it felt practically medieval, other times more modern words and clues crept in, and I found myself a little distracted trying to figure it out. Overall, a romantic, erotic and sweet story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Thank you. A pleasure to read.

Both Lindy and Cole are fine characters.

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