All Comments on 'The Rise of the Ponygirl Transport'

I have a huge ponygirl fetish, and I thought that this would be a bit more on the sex side- I was surprised, but pleasantly so. The story was amazingly well written and very creative, and very upbeat for a bondage story. It was hot in a different way, and certainly a modern story with the mention of oil troubles.

Would love to hear more about the service of a ponygirl though! :D

The other review is correct about how oil could be used more sensibly. Also i have heard that there is vastly more oil available probably nearly 500 years worth, just not at the prices we are paying for it now.

But having said all that this is an excellent little story. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Not plausible, but interesting. I don't think this belongs in the BDSM section, or even on Literotica. The one bit about a dildo seemed out of place.

Love it, but wish it was us males who were used as ponyboys.

It should be noted that this concept is nothing new. The humble ricksha has been in use in Asia since the 19th century, though currently it seems to be in decline. In any case, this story is correct in identifying the ricksha as environmentally sound.

cute story and its possible. But what I did not understand was why was a dildo used?

I very much liked the concept of this story - it sounds positively dreamy and I for one am envious of the life Kristy got to live.

That said, it could have been sexier, with more descriptions of the ponies being undressed and finding themselves naked for the first time, perhaps describing how it felt. It would have been nice too to have a parallel story about the ponyboys seeing as they were mentioned a few times, but no description of their dress or what happens when ponygirls and ponyboys came into contact in public was forthcoming.

Also, I would have loved to have seen the reaction of Sunshine Glory's friends or parents on seeing her for the first time as a pony.

For me, the story started well with a less is more approach, just letting drop a few titillating details here and there, then built and built to the halfway mark but didn't really maintain its stride in the second half (from the training onwards). Still, I gave it five stars because I really did like the concept and as far as I'm concerned, anything that makes my pussy tingle is worthy of praise, so thank you very much.

Love Zoe.