All Comments on 'The Test'

by Otazel

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
maddictmaddictover 3 years ago

That was a nice turn of events. I half expected Norman to pop into the room and bat clean-up.

I feel so betrayed as a co-worker and sorta kinda friend.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

You forgot Cuckold in the tags.

WittonWittonabout 2 years ago

Perfectly done - I was afraid that the denouement would have Norman would be watching - this was much better

And as for the complaint that the story should have been tagged "Cuckold" once again a refugee from Loving Wives doesn't get it - the term cuckold necessarily involves the husband being unaware or helpless to prevent his wife from taking a lover - obviously the husband here is neither unaware or powerless

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous