All Comments on 'Turning Contest: A Cute Maid'

How about while the model is getting her first taste the secretary happens to walk in and while the secretary is like a deer in the headlights ,,Portia decides to go for a two for one deal.

Keep up the great work. Very hot!!!

i just love your stories , i wait for more

Love your stories all of them, only thing lacking in this "contest" are the details I love so much still your writing stands alone as outstanding. Look forward to the next chapter.

Mon Madame told me to surprise her Sunday. Wonder if I wore my maid ensemble, with stockings not fishnets, if it would please her?

- LKP

I just have a feeling that Anna-Marie has an 18 year old daughter somewhere!

A great story, had me very aroused. Can't wait to read the rest!

I also love your stories and find them quite enjoyable. You're in my Top Ten of writers. Keep them cumming. mmm.

T

Aside from the implied incest (I am from Alabama, and that weirds the hell out of me! Atleast I am not from Utah!), this was a very humorous story. It really reminded me of the baker in the Canterbury Tales who had the puss filled sore on his leg that just wouldn't heal, whose patrons just couldn't get enough of his cream pies! Anyone hungry? Creamy carrots anyone? How about a cunt covered cucumber? Anyone for a puss filled cream pie? Tasty treats!! Anyone for seconds?? Get 'em while they're hot! Straight from the oven! It's dinner time, y'all! CUM and get it! How about a nice big family dinner just like Momma used to make! Everyone gets a turn, and everyone shares! All in the Family, right?

Perfect. A great quickie. Enough character development and good sex too. Love to see a more lengthy version of this. The carrots...almost fell off the chair onto the floor laughing. ..."how to get the children to eat all their vegetables..." I could see that being said.

This one is so HOT that it cries out for a sequel! Most definitely got to get the daughter involved!

very seductive and well written as always, so good

So you do not peel your carrots?

Are you a rabbit🐇

odd that the kik chat group switched from Boston to LALezContest

the small ones are ready to eat out of bag just wash.

but besides that the story was wonderful. that be me unaware but wife and maid then daughter quite a picture.