All Comments on 'Two Wheel Tango'

Well-written, even with the constant changes in viewpoint in the middle two pages. And romantic, too.

The jumping from third person to first was just too annoying to keep reading.

Good comments. I will go back and rewrite to change to first-person where it changes to third. Apparently I still have a penchant to change POV.

I really loved the way love and intimacy was generated between tho two lovers. So warm and loving I felt a lump in my heart. I managed to sence the change of narrator without bother ;-)

It's a bit late for a story judgement but to me you are a winner!!!