All Comments on 'Uncle Jake Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Characters talking

I was too distracted by the use of quotation marks and missing punctuation to get interested in the story. Seemed like it was going somewhere, there.

Jim_and_SarahJim_and_Sarahalmost 12 years ago
Nice buildup.

Nice work!

SugaranytimeSugaranytimeabout 4 years ago
love it

love it - enjoy the uncle niece stories - please continue - would love to read more - they really excite me

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