All Comments on 'You Know that This ain't Right Ch. 01'

Please don't bother submitting another story. This is the worst one I have ever read.! That was two minutes I will never get back.

I kept wondering when the story was really going to start. Then it was over.

It wasn't really a bad lot idea, but I didn't particularly like how it was written. There's no flow to it, and it also felt pritty hollow. I pritty much skipped at least 1/3 of it. I'd give it a two out of five rating.

Alright don't listen to those other people it was a good first part just a little short if u include more stuff in the second part and do it timely which I think u will it'll be good keep it up

Go ahead man keep pushing

Chapter 1 starts with 12 inches.

Chapter 2 it's down to 11 and a half, then by

Chapter 3 it's 11 inches.

That thar hillbilly school o' yourn not only din't teech y'all grammar, they din't teech y'all no numbers.

Mebbe y'all shoulda asked them to let y'all come back fer grade three.