All Comments on 'Club Breed Berlin'

Your English is very good! Writing this story is a fun way to practice! Keep up your writing and you will be fluent in no time at all.

I do think it would be even hotter to have a public breeding room at the club, and also private rooms for those who do not do public.

Also in the public room a woman in heat can either limit her partners to whom she chooses or have a public breeding party with no choice as to whom other than selecting Black, White or anyone.

More on when they are testing - what are the feelings of the girls when the test shows up positive?

A new story about this club will be very appreciated!!!!!

Robotic dialogue, awesome premise but seriously stale stagnant "build up" to a short nearly non-existent pg sex scene at the very end, ultimately boring and a let down, you can do so much better with the great premise you created