All Comments on 'Kidnapped and Ponygirl Trained'

by Sarahcheer

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oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsalmost 14 years ago
Very well done!

Thank you for writing about something with which I'm mostly unfamiliar. You make it seem very real and very desirable. I liked it, and am anxiously awaiting more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
inaccuracies

Great story, the only issue I would state is an inaccuracy in that the title says kidnapping, however there is nothing to suggest that she becomes a pony by anything other than her own free will

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
WISHING

WISH I WAS IN HER PLACE AS A PONYGURL,

MagladMaglad6 months ago

The ending feels rushed and lacks in detail. Its more like a guideline or a memo the author wrote down, with the idea of using it to write down the actual story later.

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36, f, college grad (BS and MS). Active as a ponygirl and writer as well as training slaves. I own my own clip and image series store: http://www.clips4sale.com/32519 and http://www.images4sale.com/32519 It would be nice if you would go on over after reading and voting on ...