by Sarahcheer
Thank you for writing about something with which I'm mostly unfamiliar. You make it seem very real and very desirable. I liked it, and am anxiously awaiting more from you!
Great story, the only issue I would state is an inaccuracy in that the title says kidnapping, however there is nothing to suggest that she becomes a pony by anything other than her own free will
The ending feels rushed and lacks in detail. Its more like a guideline or a memo the author wrote down, with the idea of using it to write down the actual story later.