All Comments on 'Paradise Found Pt. 01'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 5 years ago
not bad

and as for moving to Hawaii, I think they both should take one of their days and start looking for a place to live Sabrina could start another business but we will see

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Enjoyable

A very enjoyable story. Looking forward to part 2.

NewnotsureNewnotsurealmost 5 years ago
very nice

Loved the chapter .I think they will be staying more please

AgooseAgoosealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks to everyone reading and enjoying my novellas on literotica.com.

I'm especially proud of Paradise Found part 1 and part 2 is only 2 weeks away.

Love you all, Jarrett Bywaters (author)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wonderful!

I really enjoyed it and can't wait to read part 2

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38 year old writer and artist from Hagerstown, Maryland USA. Super nerdy and super sense of humor. I'm divorced, single, and am a bit of a free-spirit. I love chess, star wars, the Philadelphia Eagles and (big) women. Between the ages of 18 and 35, I was a freelance artis...

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